Thursday, April 16, 2020
The Superzap
Hi this is a fictional story of my dad when he was a child
We had to make up a story about one of our parents I chose my Dad. The only true thing was that he did love computers and still does now. He probably still dreams of making an amazing computer. What would you do if you if you made a computer that cool?!
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Hi Siara, this story was really cool and very original. I have never read a story like that so well done to you! You continue to impress me with your use of descriptive vocabulary.
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Hi Siara, what a fantastic piece of writing today. I love that you have taken on Mr Sutherlands advice of adding more drama as your story now has the reader on the edge of their seat. Keep at it!
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