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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Pony's day out

Hi this is a story I made using the words lamp, banana, movie theatre, baseball cap, and pony. We had to make up a story using the words above. I made this on https://docs.google.com/presentation/u/0/?tgif=d I found it interesting to use all of these random words and make them into a story. It was really fun doing this.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 2:45 PM

    Wow siara this is really good it is pretty cool that you write a story using only the words lamp, banana, movie theatre, baseball cap, and pony

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  2. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 5:50 PM

    Hi Siara,
    Great writing today, have you built a hut and eaten bananas in it?
    Keep up the great work.

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  3. Dave SutherlandApril 16, 2020 at 10:35 AM

    Hi Siara, it must have been challenging to use all 5 of those things! I think you have done it well as you have explained why they needed them. I'd like to see you have add a bit more drama into your stories. Maybe have something go wrong for the characters and they need to find a way to solve it.

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