Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 24, 2020
Me ten years later
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello siara this is a cool story it will be cool if that is us in ten years hopefully i can hover and you can fly from Amy.G
ReplyDeleteHi Siara, this is a really original idea for a story. Most that I have read have been about being rich but I really like yours.
ReplyDeleteHi Siara, this is such an original idea! I'd love to fly too...maybe if I keep wishing! Keep up the great writing and posting on your blog.
ReplyDeleteHi siara, this is really good. I like how you would like to fly and you included some friends in it. šš
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