Thursday, March 26, 2020
High diving giraffe
Hi this is the slide I made this of if I was the giraffe diving into the water.
I made this on slides an I wrote about if I was the giraffe diving into the water. There was a video and we had to choose which type of writing I chose if I was the giraffe. What would you do if you saw those giraffes? Would you be scared? Excited?
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Hi Siara, I really like how you have used some of the 5 senses. I love jumping off things into water. The highest I've done is 18 metres and it was scary but really thrilling too. I would love to see giraffe's jumping off a high dive although I'm not sure that they would be very graceful. Have you ever used thesaurus.com? It is great for finding really cool words to use. You could use it and find words that are better than everyday ones we use like ran and walked.
ReplyDeleteWow Siara, I really enjoyed your clever giraffe writing. I could imagine exactly how the giraffe was feeling, scared but excited! I think giraffes are quite fascinating.
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